Resume Advice Please :)

Hello everyone i am an avid user of this site and really enjoy all the input that everyone has on technical and non technical advice. I am a recent college graduate, I was wondering if you could look over my resume for looking for my first job. Thank You everyone.

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sheckler

Not crazy about the objective that doesn't really say anything, but "which" isn't the right word there

Confides? I think you mean confines, but that doesn't really fit right either.

"roll" should say role

Everyone knows what Target is, doesn't really need a description.

The second bullet under skills just says managed.

You put a period at the end of some lines but not others.

"Graphical user interface and command line interface" isn't a skill.

Don't list every version of OS X

izzyiz426

thank you anything else you would change?

izzyiz426

bump......

petedude

My best thought at the moment. . . more of everything. More to the point, you have more work to do.

You might want to look at resumes others have posted (for roles similar to the ones you want), and the feedback they got. Note formatting, and the kinds of details they included.