Resume Advice Please :)

izzyiz426izzyiz426 Member Posts: 58 ■■□□□□□□□□
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Hello everyone i am an avid user of this site and really enjoy all the input that everyone has on technical and non technical advice. I am a recent college graduate, I was wondering if you could look over my resume for looking for my first job. Thank You everyone.
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  • shecklersheckler Member Posts: 201
    Not crazy about the objective that doesn't really say anything, but "which" isn't the right word there

    Confides? I think you mean confines, but that doesn't really fit right either.

    "roll" should say role

    Everyone knows what Target is, doesn't really need a description.

    The second bullet under skills just says managed.

    You put a period at the end of some lines but not others.

    "Graphical user interface and command line interface" isn't a skill.

    Don't list every version of OS X
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  • izzyiz426izzyiz426 Member Posts: 58 ■■□□□□□□□□
    thank you anything else you would change?
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  • izzyiz426izzyiz426 Member Posts: 58 ■■□□□□□□□□
    bump......
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  • petedudepetedude Member Posts: 1,510
    My best thought at the moment. . . more of everything. More to the point, you have more work to do.

    You might want to look at resumes others have posted (for roles similar to the ones you want), and the feedback they got. Note formatting, and the kinds of details they included.
    Even if you're on the right track, you'll get run over if you just sit there.
    --Will Rogers
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