Critique my first resume attempt

SlackerlolSlackerlol Registered Users Posts: 1 ■□□□□□□□□□
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Greetings all. I am deciding to ETS from the Army after my redeployment from Afghanistan in the early summer of next year. I am currently piecing together a resume, and would like some feedback. I am by no means an english major, so I am going to apologize ahead of time for any silly mistakes you find :) thank you all and have a great day.
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  • srabieesrabiee Member Posts: 1,231 ■■■■■■■■□□
    I can't read this. Please attach or upload in PDF format.
    WGU Progress: Master of Science - Information Technology Management (Start Date: February 1, 2015)
    Completed: LYT2, TFT2, JIT2, MCT2, LZT2, SJT2 (17 CU's)
    Required: FXT2, MAT2, MBT2, C391, C392 (13 CU's)

    Bachelor of Science - Information Technology Network Design & Management (WGU - Completed August 2014)
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  • CodyyCodyy Member Posts: 223 ■■■□□□□□□□
    Its a solid start IMO. Translate to military lingo to something civilians will understand. You won't have the .mil address after you ETS so replace it with a civilian account.

    Listen to srabiee and he'll square you away, I see other issues but he's the expert here so I'd prefer you get his input first.
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