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Please critique my resume, thanks

ChadiusChadius Member Posts: 313 ■■■□□□□□□□
I figured it was time to get this resume looked at. I don't get any calls back in the last two months. So I figured this would be one place to start.

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B6KBtVzsGdLzUjZKODRSaE1LbXM&authuser=0

I think this link should work.

Thanks ahead of time for any advice.

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    MutataMutata Member Posts: 176
    Link says I need permission
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    ChadiusChadius Member Posts: 313 ■■■□□□□□□□
    Well crap, how do I post it here then? lol
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    srabieesrabiee Member Posts: 1,231 ■■■■■■■■□□
    Free file hosting service?

    You can also upload certain file types directly to your post using advanced settings.
    WGU Progress: Master of Science - Information Technology Management (Start Date: February 1, 2015)
    Completed: LYT2, TFT2, JIT2, MCT2, LZT2, SJT2 (17 CU's)
    Required: FXT2, MAT2, MBT2, C391, C392 (13 CU's)

    Bachelor of Science - Information Technology Network Design & Management (WGU - Completed August 2014)
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    GForce75GForce75 Member Posts: 222
    You have to enable the share view permissions. You can always do under google drive.
    Doctoral Candidate - BA (33/60hrs) ~ MBA/Project Management ~ BA/Business-IT
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    ChadiusChadius Member Posts: 313 ■■■□□□□□□□
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    binarysoulbinarysoul Member Posts: 993
    -your skills should be at top, e.g. Qualifications Summary
    -move job dates to the right
    -put job title on 1st line
    -owner/operator as title seems vague
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    twodogs62twodogs62 Member Posts: 393 ■■■□□□□□□□
    Not sure what job you are trying to get.
    your resume at quick glance looks like help desk or desktop person.

    is that the kind of jobs you looking for?

    i'd make it a two page resume.
    what are some key projects you have worked in?
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    JasionoJasiono Member Posts: 896 ■■■■□□□□□□
    Previous jobs, jobs not held any more, make them past tense

    2010-2012 Computer Repair Kansas


    Owner/Operator


     Upgraded hardware and software for customers


     Installed and performed various repairs to hardware and software


     Installed and designed SOHO networks


     Built PC’s to specification of customer


     Fixed malware and virus problems on customer PC’s

    I see that this section already had some past tense in there.

    I would also put down the company names you worked for.
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    ChadiusChadius Member Posts: 313 ■■■□□□□□□□
    Thanks Bianary, I'll make the changes when I get home tonight.

    @two dogs, yes I am trying to obtain full time work in either help desk or desktop support. What kind of projects would you mean?

    @Jasiono: I'll fix those.


    Thanks everyone. I'll update tonight and update the post.
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    Robertf969Robertf969 Member Posts: 190
    How did you make an impact? I can see that you did "stuff" but how did it help the organization? The experience bullets are your chance to show this. Something like "Completed X amount of tickets per month, exceeding the average of Y which lead to Z% increase in productivity"
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