Resume Advice

Not currently looking for anything new, however, would like to get into some Network Security role within the next 2-3 years. I know that's a long time but it still doesn't hurt to get my resume looked over. Don't go too hard on me, guys.


Education


Some University- Some Place
  • Master of Science in Cybersecurity – Management, May 2018
  • Taking Graduate classes as an Undergraduate with the JUMP program
  • Major GPA: N/A
Some University- Some Place
  • Information Systems, BSBA – Cybersecurity and Information Assurance, May 2017
  • Recipient of Transfer Merit Scholarship
  • Member of The National Society of Leadership and Success
  • Major GPA: 3.48

Certifications
and Training


CompTIA Security+ SY0-401 • CCNA Routing and Switching • CCNA Security


Skills



Information Security • Cisco Networking Equipment • Python programming • C# programming • SQL • Microsoft proficient • Familiarity of TCP/IP protocol suite • 7 Layer OSI model • Customer / Client Relations


Work
Experience

Network Engineer, 05/2016-Current
Company C- Some Place
  • Works closely with network engineers to create a scalable network utilizing a wide array of Cisco products
  • Assists in performing routine Cisco network maintenance for a variety of large customers
  • Participates in the process involved in the development and implementation of lab configuration and testing procedures
  • Performs a variety of electronic and technical assignments on data communications equipment and systems under general supervision
Student Specialist III (Python Programming Teacher’s Assistant), 11/2015-05/2016
University- Some Place
  • Selected for excellence in performance in class
  • Discussed assigned duties with classroom teachers in order to coordinate instructional efforts
  • Provided tutoring, for Python programming, to 20-25 Some University students
CSA, 08/2015-05/2016
Company B- Some Place
  • Assisted customers in finding merchandise and making buying decisions
  • Performed general cleaning duties, such as dusting and vacuuming, to ensure a presentable department
  • Completed other duties as assigned by management, including inventory management and operating cash register
CSA, 02/2014- 08/2015
Company A- Some Place
  • Improved quality service by recommending improved processes; identifying new product and service applications

Comments

  • scaredoftestsscaredoftests Mod Posts: 2,780 Mod
    Put Education Certs and Skills on the bottom. Get rid of the bullets! Write out what you did, it can be brief.
    Never let your fear decide your fate....
  • atippettatippett Member Posts: 154
    Put Education Certs and Skills on the bottom. Get rid of the bullets! Write out what you did, it can be brief.

    In that order? Education then Certs then Skills?
  • scaredoftestsscaredoftests Mod Posts: 2,780 Mod
    Yes. Get rid of the skills, though. You could put that in your cover letter.
    Never let your fear decide your fate....
  • sillymcnastysillymcnasty Member Posts: 254 ■■■□□□□□□□
    Put Education Certs and Skills on the bottom. Get rid of the bullets! Write out what you did, it can be brief.

    I noticed you always suggest get rid of bullets. Why is that?
  • scaredoftestsscaredoftests Mod Posts: 2,780 Mod
    I was told by an HR person once to never have bullets, but just a brief synopsis of each job. Just a paragraph is enough.
    Never let your fear decide your fate....
  • cyberguyprcyberguypr Mod Posts: 6,928 Mod
    There are different schools of thought regarding most resume thing. I personally hate what I call the bullet fest (should trademark this). Bullets are mean to emphasize something. If you bullet everything, the essence of the bullet is lost.

    Take for example your "Performs a variety of electronic and technical assignments on data communications equipment and systems under general supervision" bullet. That tells me nothing. It's way to vague and general. You would be better served by doing a short paragraph that summarizes your duties and responsibilities and then save 2-3 bullets to showcase how your contributions brought value to the business.

    For example, saying something along the lines of "Implemented XYZ as part of project ABC which resulted in $Amount saved over X years". This has way more impact than your original statement.

    Remember that hiring managers do not care about "install, deploy, maintain". Every IT monkey can do that. We want people who stand out from the thousands of candidates out there. The easier we can link your contributions to our needs, the faster we will call you.
  • atippettatippett Member Posts: 154
    cyberguypr wrote: »
    There are different schools of thought regarding most resume thing. I personally hate what I call the bullet fest (should trademark this). Bullets are mean to emphasize something. If you bullet everything, the essence of the bullet is lost.

    Take for example your "Performs a variety of electronic and technical assignments on data communications equipment and systems under general supervision" bullet. That tells me nothing. It's way to vague and general. You would be better served by doing a short paragraph that summarizes your duties and responsibilities and then save 2-3 bullets to showcase how your contributions brought value to the business.

    For example, saying something along the lines of "Implemented XYZ as part of project ABC which resulted in $Amount saved over X years". This has way more impact than your original statement.

    Remember that hiring managers do not care about "install, deploy, maintain". Every IT monkey can do that. We want people who stand out from the thousands of candidates out there. The easier we can link your contributions to our needs, the faster we will call you.

    You know, I've heard many different opinions on bullet points versus paragraph format for a job description/duties. Everyone has a different opinion. I've never thought about utilizing both. That's a great idea.
  • cyberguyprcyberguypr Mod Posts: 6,928 Mod
    There are multiple examples of this here but this is the only one I could find right now: http://www.techexams.net/attachments/forums/jobs-degrees/4106d1374162428-resume-time-sr-systems-eng.doc
  • atippettatippett Member Posts: 154
    cyberguypr wrote: »
    There are multiple examples of this here but this is the only one I could find right now: http://www.techexams.net/attachments/forums/jobs-degrees/4106d1374162428-resume-time-sr-systems-eng.doc

    I wanna know what kinda strings that guy pulled to become a senior engineer with only an Associate's degree icon_lol.gif
  • RemedympRemedymp Member Posts: 834 ■■■■□□□□□□
    Put Education Certs and Skills on the bottom. Get rid of the bullets! Write out what you did, it can be brief.

    Co-sign.
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