Resume Advice
atippett
Member Posts: 154
Not currently looking for anything new, however, would like to get into some Network Security role within the next 2-3 years. I know that's a long time but it still doesn't hurt to get my resume looked over. Don't go too hard on me, guys.
Education
Some University- Some Place
Certifications and Training
CompTIA Security+ SY0-401 • CCNA Routing and Switching • CCNA Security
Skills
Information Security • Cisco Networking Equipment • Python programming • C# programming • SQL • Microsoft proficient • Familiarity of TCP/IP protocol suite • 7 Layer OSI model • Customer / Client Relations
Work Experience
Network Engineer, 05/2016-Current
Company C- Some Place
University- Some Place
Company B- Some Place
Company A- Some Place
Education
Some University- Some Place
- Master of Science in Cybersecurity – Management, May 2018
- Taking Graduate classes as an Undergraduate with the JUMP program
- Major GPA: N/A
- Information Systems, BSBA – Cybersecurity and Information Assurance, May 2017
- Recipient of Transfer Merit Scholarship
- Member of The National Society of Leadership and Success
- Major GPA: 3.48
Certifications and Training
CompTIA Security+ SY0-401 • CCNA Routing and Switching • CCNA Security
Skills
Information Security • Cisco Networking Equipment • Python programming • C# programming • SQL • Microsoft proficient • Familiarity of TCP/IP protocol suite • 7 Layer OSI model • Customer / Client Relations
Work Experience
Network Engineer, 05/2016-Current
Company C- Some Place
- Works closely with network engineers to create a scalable network utilizing a wide array of Cisco products
- Assists in performing routine Cisco network maintenance for a variety of large customers
- Participates in the process involved in the development and implementation of lab configuration and testing procedures
- Performs a variety of electronic and technical assignments on data communications equipment and systems under general supervision
University- Some Place
- Selected for excellence in performance in class
- Discussed assigned duties with classroom teachers in order to coordinate instructional efforts
- Provided tutoring, for Python programming, to 20-25 Some University students
Company B- Some Place
- Assisted customers in finding merchandise and making buying decisions
- Performed general cleaning duties, such as dusting and vacuuming, to ensure a presentable department
- Completed other duties as assigned by management, including inventory management and operating cash register
Company A- Some Place
- Improved quality service by recommending improved processes; identifying new product and service applications
Comments
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scaredoftests Mod Posts: 2,780 ModPut Education Certs and Skills on the bottom. Get rid of the bullets! Write out what you did, it can be brief.Never let your fear decide your fate....
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atippett Member Posts: 154scaredoftests wrote: »Put Education Certs and Skills on the bottom. Get rid of the bullets! Write out what you did, it can be brief.
In that order? Education then Certs then Skills? -
scaredoftests Mod Posts: 2,780 ModYes. Get rid of the skills, though. You could put that in your cover letter.Never let your fear decide your fate....
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sillymcnasty Member Posts: 254 ■■■□□□□□□□scaredoftests wrote: »Put Education Certs and Skills on the bottom. Get rid of the bullets! Write out what you did, it can be brief.
I noticed you always suggest get rid of bullets. Why is that? -
scaredoftests Mod Posts: 2,780 ModI was told by an HR person once to never have bullets, but just a brief synopsis of each job. Just a paragraph is enough.Never let your fear decide your fate....
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cyberguypr Mod Posts: 6,928 ModThere are different schools of thought regarding most resume thing. I personally hate what I call the bullet fest (should trademark this). Bullets are mean to emphasize something. If you bullet everything, the essence of the bullet is lost.
Take for example your "Performs a variety of electronic and technical assignments on data communications equipment and systems under general supervision" bullet. That tells me nothing. It's way to vague and general. You would be better served by doing a short paragraph that summarizes your duties and responsibilities and then save 2-3 bullets to showcase how your contributions brought value to the business.
For example, saying something along the lines of "Implemented XYZ as part of project ABC which resulted in $Amount saved over X years". This has way more impact than your original statement.
Remember that hiring managers do not care about "install, deploy, maintain". Every IT monkey can do that. We want people who stand out from the thousands of candidates out there. The easier we can link your contributions to our needs, the faster we will call you. -
atippett Member Posts: 154cyberguypr wrote: »There are different schools of thought regarding most resume thing. I personally hate what I call the bullet fest (should trademark this). Bullets are mean to emphasize something. If you bullet everything, the essence of the bullet is lost.
Take for example your "Performs a variety of electronic and technical assignments on data communications equipment and systems under general supervision" bullet. That tells me nothing. It's way to vague and general. You would be better served by doing a short paragraph that summarizes your duties and responsibilities and then save 2-3 bullets to showcase how your contributions brought value to the business.
For example, saying something along the lines of "Implemented XYZ as part of project ABC which resulted in $Amount saved over X years". This has way more impact than your original statement.
Remember that hiring managers do not care about "install, deploy, maintain". Every IT monkey can do that. We want people who stand out from the thousands of candidates out there. The easier we can link your contributions to our needs, the faster we will call you.
You know, I've heard many different opinions on bullet points versus paragraph format for a job description/duties. Everyone has a different opinion. I've never thought about utilizing both. That's a great idea. -
cyberguypr Mod Posts: 6,928 ModThere are multiple examples of this here but this is the only one I could find right now: http://www.techexams.net/attachments/forums/jobs-degrees/4106d1374162428-resume-time-sr-systems-eng.doc
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atippett Member Posts: 154cyberguypr wrote: »There are multiple examples of this here but this is the only one I could find right now: http://www.techexams.net/attachments/forums/jobs-degrees/4106d1374162428-resume-time-sr-systems-eng.doc
I wanna know what kinda strings that guy pulled to become a senior engineer with only an Associate's degree -
Remedymp Member Posts: 834 ■■■■□□□□□□scaredoftests wrote: »Put Education Certs and Skills on the bottom. Get rid of the bullets! Write out what you did, it can be brief.
Co-sign.