Critique

Phliplip112

I did redid my resume last night to add my newly acquired CCNA cert and also because i never get any call backs for any helpdesk/desktop entry level type jobs. I want to know from the experienced how it looks. The format is a little off but its somewhat the same.

My goal was to make it simple to read with a quick scan because from what i hear HR just scan things.

heres a link http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=dhg5knn7_0hm9b2gv6&hl=en

let me know if the link doesn't work

laidbackfreak

imo its a little bit thin on the ground, I appreciate you've only got a year's real world experience, but I would expand on your areas on understanding more, just to fill it out.

I appreciate what your saying in terms of HR just scanning it, but further up the chain I want to see a little more flesh on there.....