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Phliplip112
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I did redid my resume last night to add my newly acquired CCNA cert 
and also because i never get any call backs for any helpdesk/desktop entry level type jobs. I want to know from the experienced how it looks. The format is a little off but its somewhat the same.
My goal was to make it simple to read with a quick scan because from what i hear HR just scan things.
heres a link http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=dhg5knn7_0hm9b2gv6&hl=en
let me know if the link doesn't work
and also because i never get any call backs for any helpdesk/desktop entry level type jobs. I want to know from the experienced how it looks. The format is a little off but its somewhat the same.My goal was to make it simple to read with a quick scan because from what i hear HR just scan things.
heres a link http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=dhg5knn7_0hm9b2gv6&hl=en
let me know if the link doesn't work
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laidbackfreak
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imo its a little bit thin on the ground, I appreciate you've only got a year's real world experience, but I would expand on your areas on understanding more, just to fill it out.
I appreciate what your saying in terms of HR just scanning it, but further up the chain I want to see a little more flesh on there.....if I say something that can be taken one of two ways and one of them offends, I usually mean the other one :-) -
Phliplip112
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laidbackfreak wrote:but I would expand on your areas on understanding more, just to fill it out
will do