Resume critique

Strong1Strong1 Member Posts: 18 ■□□□□□□□□□
Hello all! I would appreciate anyone taking a look at my resume and giving it a critique. All advice would be greatly appreciated.


SUMMARY
Proven employee with nearly 20 years experience. Recently returned to school to finish my degree and am looking for an entry level Information Technology position.

WORK EXPERIENCE
Manufacturing Technician
June 2006 - present
Manufacturing - Other

Compound materials to mix rubber for use in the manufacturing of high performance aftermarket tires.

Expert in ISO9000 quality standards and 5S manufacturing process.

Shear Operator
May 2004 - June 2006
Manufacturing - Other

Operate shear press to cut sheet metal to desired specifications for manufacturing of commercial cabinets and check out stands.
Blue print reading and precise measurements


EDUCATION

Some College Coursework Completed, Bachelor of Science in Information Technology,
August 2010 - Present
Western Governor's University | Utah (online)
working on accelerated program. Should finish my degree by 2012.

Some College Coursework Completed, Bachelor of Science Computer Science,
August 1990 - May 1993
Kennesaw State University | Kennesaw, GA
Finished most core classes and some degree classes.


CERTIFICATIONS

CIW Web Associate
October 2010
CompTIA A+
May 2011
Should have Cisco CCNA by August 2011. Will be obtaining several others before finishing my degree including CIW Web Designer,Security +, CCNA Security, CIW Database, Project+, CIW Java Script, and Microsoft MS70-680.







SKILLS

Computer Hardware Troubleshooting
Expert
Computer Software Installation
Expert
building PC's
Expert
MS Windows
Expert
Computer Hardware Installation
Expert
Linux
Experience
Network Administration
Experience

Comments

  • Strong1Strong1 Member Posts: 18 ■□□□□□□□□□
    Thank for all the help! *LOL*icon_cry.gif
  • LoMoLoMo Banned Posts: 84 ■■□□□□□□□□
    Do you have any IT experience at all?
  • Strong1Strong1 Member Posts: 18 ■□□□□□□□□□
    Nothing that I got a regular paycheck for. Mostly just side work for friends and family. But computers have been my hobby for over 30 years.
  • LoMoLoMo Banned Posts: 84 ■■□□□□□□□□
    Strong1 wrote: »
    SUMMARY
    Proven employee with nearly 20 years experience. Recently returned to school to finish my degree and am looking for an entry level Information Technology position.

    WORK EXPERIENCE
    Manufacturing Technician
    June 2006 - present
    Manufacturing - Other

    Compound materials to mix rubber for use in the manufacturing of high performance aftermarket tires.

    Expert in ISO9000 quality standards and 5S manufacturing process.

    Shear Operator
    May 2004 - June 2006
    Manufacturing - Other

    Operate shear press to cut sheet metal to desired specifications for manufacturing of commercial cabinets and check out stands.
    Blue print reading and precise measurements


    EDUCATION

    Some College Coursework Completed, Bachelor of Science in Information Technology,
    August 2010 - Present
    Western Governor's University | Utah (online)
    working on accelerated program. Should finish my degree by 2012.

    Some College Coursework Completed, Bachelor of Science Computer Science,
    August 1990 - May 1993
    Kennesaw State University | Kennesaw, GA
    Finished most core classes and some degree classes.


    CERTIFICATIONS

    CIW Web Associate
    October 2010
    CompTIA A+
    May 2011
    Should have Cisco CCNA by August 2011. Will be obtaining several others before finishing my degree including CIW Web Designer,Security +, CCNA Security, CIW Database, Project+, CIW Java Script, and Microsoft MS70-680.







    SKILLS

    Computer Hardware Troubleshooting
    Expert
    Computer Software Installation
    Expert
    building PC's
    Expert
    MS Windows
    Expert
    Computer Hardware Installation
    Expert
    Linux
    Experience
    Network Administration
    Experience

    The bolded stuff I would take out and if you use the word expert make sure you can back it up.
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