Resume Critique

phenixphyre

Please take a look at my resume and let me know what changes that I can make to make it better.

Thanks!!

cyberguypr

You may want to remove all the personal info. Didn't you post this a few weeks ago?

Akaricloud

I feel like we've been through this before...

Why don't you go read the comments posted in the thread you made a couple weeks ago with what looks like almost the exact same resume.

jmreicha

Either didn't see the old thread or forgot but am bored, so:

• Remove excess whitespace (Heading is huge, side margins, font size is kinda big)
• Shorten to one page
• Education at bottom, restyle section ie remove bolding
• Keep formatting consistent, last section is double spaced and others are not, education has different margins, etc
• Think about adding a summary section at the beginning
• Use proactive descriptions in job experience, relate the value you added to the company

NetworkingStudent

phenixphyre wrote: »

Please take a look at my resume and let me know what changes that I can make to make it better.

Thanks!!

I saw you went to Minnesota School of Business…I went there too. If you call the Career Services office they will help you touch up your resume for free. Good Luck!