Time for my resume

ConradJ

Hey guys,

Another one to tear up... Have at 'er, and please don't hold anything back!

I have focused a lot on my current employer, the reason being I have learned the most here and the rest is, as they say, history (read: not much of great note happened at these places).

Thanks for any advice, it is very much appreciated!

Akaricloud

Rewrite the Summary; it's a run on, fragmented sentence with 3 ands.

Same goes for the technical skill set section. If you're going to use sentences for it then make sure they are grammatically sound, otherwise just list them. For example you wrote "Responsibilities range from..." but to what? There are just so many sentences with 2-3-4 ands that disrupt the flow.

I'm also a bit confused about your Systems Specialist work section. The job description really just reads like it should be one of the bullet points.

ConradJ

That is exactly the kind of feedback I am looking for! Thanks for your time, I do appreciate it.

ConradJ

Sorry I didn't reply earlier, but thank you very much, sir! I do appreciate your time and involvement. Here's to a success story coming from this, cheers!