Resume Critique Tips are appreciated

I don't Know how well you all can see the picture. I attached it as well, any tips would help me out and be greatly appreciated.

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cyberguypr

Is it me or is the pic very very small?

UniqueAgEnT

cyberguypr wrote: »

Is it me or is the pic very very small?

Yeah very small.

For your resume:

Overall, not bad for an entry level position. Few suggestions below:

I'm not sure why you have employment and experience sections. These should be the same thing.

Your "Experience" section seems more like a Skills section. I would add more detailed description of what you do at the IT internship, and this should remove some of the things you have in your "Experience" section. It is better to show the future employer that you worked on _______ at your position and how it benefitted the company, rather than in your personal experience section. I think this would help strengthen your resume.

HLRS

seems weak to me, could be better. take out word "experience" since employment is same, vice versa, just an opinion

Vik210

Try to change objective to summary and use it to summarize your education and experience with objective.

YFZblu

I'm not a fan of putting logos on the resume - It just looks like you're trying to fill space.

Vik210

YFZblu wrote: »

I'm not a fan of putting logos on the resume - It just looks like you're trying to fill space.

Well pointed.. I wont mind a CCIE logo though!

Newtech92

Thanks for all the suggestions guys, I didn't mean for my resume to come out in such a small image. I will take your advice and try to improve on it I will try and upload a revised copy later.