New guy here requesting a Resume Critique

pobo90

Hey everyone. This forum has been very informational and I have learned a lot creeping on threads as a guest. I just signed up for my last semester and am very nervous about obtaining a job since there seems to be much difficulty in obtaining one. One place I can start is by making sure my resume is readable, aesthetically pleasing, and convincing. I want to depend on your expertise and would appreciate any comments on how to optimize my resume. I'm probably going to start with helpdesk/NOC/assistant positions, just to get some experience. Jobs that also compensate with experience is another option I'm considering. Anyway to post that in my resume will be awesome.thanks for your time and opinions guys.



sorry if its hard to read.

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megatran808

Your resume format looks pretty good. I just would change your order of most recent items to the top.

So for your Education and work experience put the most recent education and position from Newest to old.

I would also elaborate more on what you did for your IT work experience. More bullets of things you accomplished or project you did at each of your work places. Maybe a minimum of 3 bullet statements for each position. I'm sure you've done more than a one liner for each job.