Resume Review Request

Hello Everyone,

I have a request for a resume review. This person is trying to move into IT full-time. Can you make any suggestions as to changes that need to be made to this resume.

He is also studying for the Network +. The end goal is to get into sys admin or network admin type employment.

I thank you in advance for your help.

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NicWhite

Hello,

I would really appreciate the help a resume review. Even if the criticism may be tough, I would like to hear it.

xXErebuS

Looks pretty good... where is your education history; do you have a college degree?

I would maybe consolidate your skills sections or at minimum move the personal skills to before work history.

Watch your grammar (Build custom PC's)

Get rid of anything that's not needed - i.e. "install and maintain network cabling using crimpers and punch down tools."

NicWhite

xXErebuS wrote: »

Looks pretty good... where is your education history; do you have a college degree?

I would maybe consolidate your skills sections or at minimum move the personal skills to before work history.

Watch your grammar (Build custom PC's)

Get rid of anything that's not needed - i.e. "install and maintain network cabling using crimpers and punch down tools."

Thank you. He only has a high school diploma. Should we list that?