Please Critique my Resume
Fidelity
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Hey Techexams!
I'm trying to move into a Systems Administration role, but have been unsuccessful so far. Positions seem to be pretty sparse for this or require crazy amounts of experience (5-10 years) in my state. I have yet to receive any calls or emails for the positions I have applied. I'd appreciate it if you guys could review my resume and see if you notice any problems with it.
Thanks!
I'm trying to move into a Systems Administration role, but have been unsuccessful so far. Positions seem to be pretty sparse for this or require crazy amounts of experience (5-10 years) in my state. I have yet to receive any calls or emails for the positions I have applied. I'd appreciate it if you guys could review my resume and see if you notice any problems with it.
Thanks!
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Death Dream Member Posts: 149Does anyone else find that font annoying to look at or is it just me?
Technical Skills, I don't like all the bullet points tossed everywhere. Have you tried looking at what a list format would look like with commas instead?
Get rid of the "tasked as Systems Administrator" Make that into a bullet point if you really feel it is necessary.
You have gaps in your work history, is there a reason the others are not listed? Might be another reason you are not getting call backs. -
Tremie24 Member Posts: 85 ■■□□□□□□□□I think looks ok, I would switch tech skills and education. I would also center the words technical skills, education, and employment history.
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Fidelity Member Posts: 43 ■■□□□□□□□□What annoys you about the font? It is Times New Roman, I think.
During the gaps I have not been working and only attending school full time. Is there a way I should address this? -
Zomboidicus Member Posts: 105 ■■□□□□□□□□Death Dream wrote: »You have gaps in your work history, is there a reason the others are not listed? Might be another reason you are not getting call backs.
I don't mean to hi-jack a thread, but if you have work gaps like because you were going to school, or/and didn't have any luck finding relevant IT experience, do you simply leave it as is? Or do you list job title(s) for IT-irrelevant jobs and duration and give no description of the job whatsoever?2016 Certification Goals: Who knows -
Death Dream Member Posts: 149That is not Times New Roman, at least for me. I'm seeing "Century Gothic" as your font. I find the font annoying to my eyes. I if you like it, run with it.
I'm not sure how you address the work gaps, I don't have that in my work history so I never thought to much about it. -
Tremie24 Member Posts: 85 ■■□□□□□□□□I wouldn't worry about the employment gaps, I had gaps on my resume and I had no trouble getting call backs. You might get asked in an interview, and you could explain then.
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Fidelity Member Posts: 43 ■■□□□□□□□□You were right, Death Dream, it was set to Century Gothic. I've changed it to Times New Roman. I think that it does indeed look a bit better.
I'm going to play around with the skills section and see what else I can come up with.