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Critique my resume

PristonPriston Member Posts: 999 ■■■■□□□□□□
A.A.S. in Networking Technologies
A+, Network+, CCNA

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    EssendonEssendon Member Posts: 4,546 ■■■■■■■■■■
    Please take a look at the following thread for some great tips, your resume needs a fair bit of work. Post back when you've edited it accordingly.

    http://www.techexams.net/forums/jobs-degrees/73494-resume-critique-help-request.html
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    PristonPriston Member Posts: 999 ■■■■□□□□□□
    How's this so far? am I going in the right direction?
    A.A.S. in Networking Technologies
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    XyroXyro Member Posts: 623
    You are in the process of improving but it still needs a lot of work.

    To begin:

    Add a desired position title
    Repair misspellings
    Certifications are hiding on bottom - move certifications to top of resume.
    "Technical Experience" section is so sparce you would be better off just eliminating it.
    Service Associate position has no description - add
    Alignment is off - repair
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    PristonPriston Member Posts: 999 ■■■■□□□□□□
    Service Associate was at a Grocery store, so I wasn't really sure if a description was necessary. I leave the job on my resume because I stayed there 5 years. It might help some people get over the fact I stayed only 1 year at 2 of my other jobs.

    I'm going to try and think of more stuff to add to my current job description and if that takes enough space I'll remove the technical experience section.
    A.A.S. in Networking Technologies
    A+, Network+, CCNA
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