Critique my resume

Priston

Critique my resume, let me know what you think.

ver 2
http://www.techexams.net/attachments/forums/jobs-degrees/5067d1394990586-critique-my-resume-nameless-resume-ver-2.doc

Essendon

Please take a look at the following thread for some great tips, your resume needs a fair bit of work. Post back when you've edited it accordingly.

http://www.techexams.net/forums/jobs-degrees/73494-resume-critique-help-request.html

Priston

How's this so far? am I going in the right direction?

Xyro

You are in the process of improving but it still needs a lot of work.

To begin:

Add a desired position title
Repair misspellings
Certifications are hiding on bottom - move certifications to top of resume.
"Technical Experience" section is so sparce you would be better off just eliminating it.
Service Associate position has no description - add
Alignment is off - repair

Priston

Service Associate was at a Grocery store, so I wasn't really sure if a description was necessary. I leave the job on my resume because I stayed there 5 years. It might help some people get over the fact I stayed only 1 year at 2 of my other jobs.

I'm going to try and think of more stuff to add to my current job description and if that takes enough space I'll remove the technical experience section.