Resume Critique

phenixphyre

Please take a look at my resume and let me know what changes that I can make to make it better.

Thanks!!

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cyberguypr

You may want to remove all the personal info. Didn't you post this a few weeks ago?

Akaricloud

I feel like we've been through this before...

Why don't you go read the comments posted in the thread you made a couple weeks ago with what looks like almost the exact same resume.

jmreicha

Either didn't see the old thread or forgot but am bored, so:

Remove excess whitespace (Heading is huge, side margins, font size is kinda big)
Shorten to one page
Education at bottom, restyle section ie remove bolding
Keep formatting consistent, last section is double spaced and others are not, education has different margins, etc
Think about adding a summary section at the beginning
Use proactive descriptions in job experience, relate the value you added to the company

NetworkingStudent

phenixphyre wrote: »

Please take a look at my resume and let me know what changes that I can make to make it better.

Thanks!!

I saw you went to Minnesota School of Business…I went there too. If you call the Career Services office they will help you touch up your resume for free. Good Luck!