Looking for resmue advise please

[FONT=&amp]Charles S. Snedegar Sr.[/FONT]
[FONT=&amp]P.O. Box , Emmitsburg, MD 21727[/FONT]
[FONT=&amp] (301)447- or (240)285-[/FONT]
[FONT=&amp]csnedegar@.com[/FONT][FONT=&amp] or [/FONT][FONT=&amp]csnedegar@.itt-tech.edu[/FONT]
[FONT=&amp]OBJECTIVE[/FONT]
[FONT=&amp]To obtain a position in the IT field that has opportunities for further advancement as my education and knowledge advances. [/FONT]
[FONT=&amp]EDUCATION[/FONT]
[FONT=&amp] ITT Technical Institute, [/FONT][FONT=&amp]Owings Mills, MD Anticipated Graduation Date: June 2013[/FONT]
[FONT=&amp] Associate of Applied Science [/FONT]
[FONT=&amp] Information Technology-Computer Network Systems[/FONT]
[FONT=&amp]COMPUTER/TECHNICAL SKILLS[/FONT]
[FONT=&amp] Operating Systems[/FONT]
· [FONT=&amp]Windows 95/98/ME/XP/Vista/7/Windows Server 2008[/FONT]
· [FONT=&amp]Linux Fedora/Red Hat Enterprise[/FONT]
[FONT=&amp]Networking [/FONT]
· [FONT=&amp]TCP/IP, UDP[/FONT]
· [FONT=&amp]Active Directory Services, DNS, DHCP[/FONT]
· [FONT=&amp]Good knowledge of the OSI/TCP/IP models[/FONT]
[FONT=&amp]Tools[/FONT]
· [FONT=&amp]Norton Antivirus[/FONT]
· [FONT=&amp]Microsoft Office Professional 2003/2007, Microsoft Visio, Microsoft Project 2008.[/FONT]
· [FONT=&amp]Python Program writing software[/FONT]
· [FONT=&amp]Raptor Flow chart design software[/FONT]
[FONT=&amp]Platforms[/FONT]
· [FONT=&amp]I have decent knowledge of Dell PC’s I have taken mine apart and rebuilt it multiple times for upgrades and learning purposes’. [/FONT]
[FONT=&amp]Certifications[/FONT]
· [FONT=&amp]A+ first part of the two is scheduled on 3-31-12. Second part will be two weeks after that.[/FONT]
· [FONT=&amp]Net+ will be the next one. I already have the study materials. [/FONT]

[FONT=&amp]EMPLOYEMENT EXPERIENCE[/FONT]
[FONT=&amp] Aerotec Temp Service, [/FONT][FONT=&amp]Chambersburg, PA November 2011-Present [/FONT]
[FONT=&amp]Welder at Grove Worldwide/Manitowoc[/FONT]
· [FONT=&amp]Building Frames for off terrain cranes.[/FONT]
· [FONT=&amp]Welding 80% of my shift, measuring out parts the other 20%[/FONT]

[FONT=&amp]Essroc Cement, [/FONT][FONT=&amp]Frederick, MD June 2004-January 2009 [/FONT]
[FONT=&amp]Several positions held[/FONT]
· [FONT=&amp]Started as a labor. All clean up duties applied.[/FONT]
· [FONT=&amp]Won the job bid for Shift utility Person. It was a light maintenance position minor repairs and welding.[/FONT]
· [FONT=&amp]Won the job bib for Crane operator. Operate an over head rail crane to keep material bins full for cement production.[/FONT]
· [FONT=&amp]Won the job bid for Millwright. Full time maintenance position with all repairs, welding fabricating, oil and lubrication of moving parts.[/FONT]

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Charles0778

anything please any advise would be great.

ptilsen

Post Word version. You can attach it directly to your post or link to your choice of free "cloud" storage. It is hard to look at, much less evaluate a BB code version.

Edit: But I will get right out there and say **** the objective. You have a summary or nothing, but not an objective. Your objective is, almost by definition, to get a job. The prospective employer knows that, and anything explaining it is a waste of time and space.

Repo Man

My opinion:

~Remove Windows 95/98/ME.
~Remove the years/versions from your software list
~Remove or reword the platforms section. I don't want to say 'lie' but say your are familiar with assembling laptops and desktops leaving out the fact that it's your hardware.
~Remove certifications until you get them
~ Add in more experience from your schooling. Talk about lab time, did you build a domain, configure a router, run wiring, etc. Instead of listing random hardware or terms it's important to list what you did them with them. You need to add as much to your technical section as you possibly can.

I know it's hard putting together a resume without work experience in the field but your work experience could be worded in a way that it makes you look like a better candidate. A lot of entry level work is all break fix with printers/laptops so someone hiring might like your prior work and think it would help you in that type of role. Those are the jobs I'd apply to first.

Charles0778

TYVM for the suggestions I have made some changes to it with out trying to make it to long still 2 pages.
Charles S. Snedegar Sr.
P.O. Box , Emmitsburg, MD 21727
(301)447- or (240)285-
csnedegar@.com or csnedegar@.itt-tech.edu
EDUCATION
ITT Technical Institute, Owings Mills, MD Anticipated Graduation Date: June 2013
Associate of Applied Science
Information Technology-Computer Network Systems
Classes are split between Lab and Theory (classroom) 20 plus hours of each.

I have over 40 hours of Lab time working with Windows 7. Setting it up configuring and troubleshooting problems.
I also have 40 plus hours of Windows Server lab time setting up DNS servers and DHCP, Backing up data, setting user permissions, and troubleshooting issues that could arise such as log on, printer controls, DHCP issues etc.
Class final project was to set up a LAN for a small Business in a 3 story building our group received the highest grade out of 6 groups.

COMPUTER/TECHNICAL SKILLS
Operating Systems

Windows XP/Vista/7/Windows Server 2008
Linux Fedora/Centos/Red Hat Enterprise

Networking

TCP/IP, UDP Internet Protocols
DNS, DHCP and currently working with Active Directory Services
Good knowledge of the OSI/TCP/IP models
Setting up and troubleshooting network printers.
Know most of the TCP/IP ports and port numbers

Tools

Norton Antivirus, McAfee Antivirus
Microsoft Office Professional, Microsoft Visio, Microsoft Project, Microsoft Tech Net.com
Python Program writing software
Raptor Flow chart design software
Google

Platforms

I have decent knowledge of Dell PC’s and most desktops such as Hp, compact, Alienware, Falcon Northwest.
I have also rebuilt a variety of laptops most where Hp or Toshiba.
I’m not afraid to use Google or manufactures web sites if I don’t know something myself.
I have a Virtual Machine of Windows 2000, XP, Vista, 7, Server 2008 and Linux Fedora set up on an external Hard drive I use to learn how to navigate and troubleshoot with them at home on my own time.
Currently my Windows Server is set up with a parent and child domain so I can apply the Active Directory lessons I’m learning in school to them.

EMPLOYEMENT EXPERIENCE
Aerotec Temp Service, Chambersburg, PA November 2011-Present
Welder at Grove Worldwide/Manitowoc

Building Frames for off terrain cranes.
Welding 80% of my shift, measuring out parts the other 20%

Essroc Cement, Frederick, MD June 2004-January 2009
Several positions held

Started as a labor. All clean up duties applied.
Won the job bid for Shift utility Person. It was a light maintenance position minor repairs and welding.
Won the job bib for Crane operator. Operate an over head rail crane to keep material bins full for cement production.
Won the job bid for Millwright. Full time maintenance position with all repairs, welding fabricating, oil and lubrication of moving parts.

again any suggestions appreciated ty.

NiftySwifty

Can you post a word format version? About half of a successful resume is successful formatting. I know it's shallow, but it is what it is.

Akaricloud

My largest complaint with it is the style in which it's written. It sounds like you're having a conversation with a friend, not professionally presenting your skill set. Specifically I'm talking about language such as "I have", "I also have", know most", "I'm not afraid", ect.

Most of the tools section seems really pointless. Anyone can use technet or google and it doesn't really need to be reflected on a resume.

For essroc it's really confusing what you actually did. Did you just win job bids or actually have responsibilities?

Also, Listing certifications that you don't have is usually frowned upon.