Resume review!!

izzyiz426izzyiz426 Member Posts: 58 ■■□□□□□□□□
Tell me what you think... Still working on little things! I have gone through many revisions hope i'm nearing the end! lol

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  • keenonkeenon Member Posts: 1,922 ■■■■□□□□□□
    looks good glad your using a summary

    can you add any more information related things your familiar with?

    programming languages
    hardware vendor products
    operating systems
    etc
    Become the stainless steel sharp knife in a drawer full of rusty spoons
  • ajs1976ajs1976 Member Posts: 1,945 ■■■■□□□□□□
    in your summary you mention 2 years of experience but under jobs you only show a 5 month internship and no other positions.

    "Possess knowledge within Mac OSX . . ." Using the word "within" seems awkward.

    Under activities, can the website and pc work be moved into some type of experience section? They seem out of place there.

    I'm not getting enough about what you know, what you have done, and what you want to do.
    Andy

    2020 Goals: 0 of 2 courses complete, 0 of 2 exams complete
  • izzyiz426izzyiz426 Member Posts: 58 ■■□□□□□□□□
    How you incorporate that within the resume? Would you use bullet points or explain using text?
  • nman99nman99 Member Posts: 35 ■■□□□□□□□□
    izzyiz426 wrote: »
    How you incorporate that within the resume? Would you use bullet points or explain using text?

    Izzy, How do you incorporate what within your resume ? Are you talking about why you only have 5 months experience listed and you need to explain that or are you talking about something else ?
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