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Resume Critique Please!!!! ...for entry level job
droolmonkey
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Education
Los Angeles Mission College (Mission Hills, CA)
- Information Technology (GPA-4.0) 2/2013-Present
Comptia A+ certification
Comptia Net+ certification (June 21, 2013)
Comptia Sec+ certification (July 30, 2013)
National Polytechnic College of Engineering and Oceaneering (Wilmington, CA)
- Commercial Diving specializing in Dive Medicine (GPA-3.7) 9/2006 - 8/2007
N.B.D.H.M.T. Diver Medic
N.B.D.H.M.T. Hyperbaric Tech
N.R.EMT-a
El Camino Real High School (Woodland Hills, CA)
General - 6/2001 (GPA-Don't Ask)
Experience
Legacy Offshore Diving & Marine (Morgan City, LA)
Commercial Diver and Medic - June 2012/Present
Underwater salvage and construction.
Maintain all equipment (mechanical, pneumatic, hydraulic, and electrical).
Dive team specific medic and EMT.
Beverly Hills Center for Wound Care and Hyperbaric Medicine (Beverly Hills, CA)
Hyperbaric Intern - January 2007/August 2007
Operate hyperbaric chambers.
Run treatments.
Keep patients calm and comfortable.
Maintain air and gas systems for the chambers.
My Gym Children's Fitness Center (Thousand Oaks, CA)
Director - 2003/June 2012.
Teach age appropriate classes.
Organize and oversee daily operations and plan yearly programming.
Provide happy and friendly customer service daily.
Maintain a wireless SOHO network (3 dedicated computers and whoever logged on)
Child Development Institute (Woodland Hills, CA)
Behavior Interventionist - February 2008/February 2009
Carry out behavior intervention according to individual treatment plans.
Work on a team of therapists to get children with special needs whatever help they needed
Provide emotional support and training for parents who were having a hard time and/or needed additional help and education
References
References available upon request.
Skills, Hobbies, Applicable projects
- Design, build, and assemble PC's for family, friends, and old employers based on need and want.
- Troubleshoot pc problems using Windows utilities (virus deletion and recovery, windows recovery environment, safe mode, system images, backups etc...)
- Familiar with most Linux GUI's including Ubuntu, CentOS, Mint
- Learning Linux BASH
- Implement wireless networks for both Linux and Microsoft including configuring new installations and troubleshooting network problems
- build and utilize file servers for multiple htpc setups.
- Administer home network with 8 dedicated nodes utilizing static addresses and general network security implements in both wired and wireless formats.
Los Angeles Mission College (Mission Hills, CA)
- Information Technology (GPA-4.0) 2/2013-Present
Comptia A+ certification
Comptia Net+ certification (June 21, 2013)
Comptia Sec+ certification (July 30, 2013)
National Polytechnic College of Engineering and Oceaneering (Wilmington, CA)
- Commercial Diving specializing in Dive Medicine (GPA-3.7) 9/2006 - 8/2007
N.B.D.H.M.T. Diver Medic
N.B.D.H.M.T. Hyperbaric Tech
N.R.EMT-a
El Camino Real High School (Woodland Hills, CA)
General - 6/2001 (GPA-Don't Ask)
Experience
Legacy Offshore Diving & Marine (Morgan City, LA)
Commercial Diver and Medic - June 2012/Present
Underwater salvage and construction.
Maintain all equipment (mechanical, pneumatic, hydraulic, and electrical).
Dive team specific medic and EMT.
Beverly Hills Center for Wound Care and Hyperbaric Medicine (Beverly Hills, CA)
Hyperbaric Intern - January 2007/August 2007
Operate hyperbaric chambers.
Run treatments.
Keep patients calm and comfortable.
Maintain air and gas systems for the chambers.
My Gym Children's Fitness Center (Thousand Oaks, CA)
Director - 2003/June 2012.
Teach age appropriate classes.
Organize and oversee daily operations and plan yearly programming.
Provide happy and friendly customer service daily.
Maintain a wireless SOHO network (3 dedicated computers and whoever logged on)
Child Development Institute (Woodland Hills, CA)
Behavior Interventionist - February 2008/February 2009
Carry out behavior intervention according to individual treatment plans.
Work on a team of therapists to get children with special needs whatever help they needed
Provide emotional support and training for parents who were having a hard time and/or needed additional help and education
References
References available upon request.
Skills, Hobbies, Applicable projects
- Design, build, and assemble PC's for family, friends, and old employers based on need and want.
- Troubleshoot pc problems using Windows utilities (virus deletion and recovery, windows recovery environment, safe mode, system images, backups etc...)
- Familiar with most Linux GUI's including Ubuntu, CentOS, Mint
- Learning Linux BASH
- Implement wireless networks for both Linux and Microsoft including configuring new installations and troubleshooting network problems
- build and utilize file servers for multiple htpc setups.
- Administer home network with 8 dedicated nodes utilizing static addresses and general network security implements in both wired and wireless formats.
Comments
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OptionsUniqueAgEnT
Member Posts: 102
Here is my feedback:
Is GPA - Don't ask actually on the resume you send out? I would not include High School on your resume since you are attending college.
I'm confused on the Net+ / Sec+ dates next to them since they are in the future. Does this mean you have them scheduled?
Be more specific on the Degree you are pursuing.
Remove References section
I do not like the format for your experience where your job title is located. I would possibly readjust that.
Keep the Skills section but remove hobbies/applicable projects from the title. -
Optionsdroolmonkey
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yes, both tests are paid for and scheduled. ...I will remove that "Don't ask" from the final revision. Actually I'll remove the high school section from it.
Hows this one??
Resume with no info.doc
Thanks for the feedback! Ive got 4 different companies and 3 people asking me for my resume, so I've got to jam!! -
OptionsUniqueAgEnT
Member Posts: 102
If you insist on keeping Net+/Sec+ on your resume, put Expected before the dates.
I would remove References.
Bullet points would look cleaner in your experience section. Your formatting looks poor with the Position name tabbed twice and the duties tabbed once.
All experience in past should be in past tense. Current job will be present tense.