Resume critique

Serj

I haven't updated my resume in awhile. I'm planning on looking for new job soon, any criticisms/comments/compliments would be great.

Thanks


Resume.doc

Asif Dasl

There were a number of things, so I just changed it and I've uploaded it again. I changed margins, added certifications, added punctuation throughout & added a few words here and there.

You need to start using tables for your certs cause WGU will give you numerous ones to add going forward and it'll look nicer that way. You need to clarify "Assist Server & Network team" - what did you do? Emphasise that you worked in a team as well as independently.

HTH.

Resume - Asif Dasl.doc

EDIT - I should have changed the previous job descriptions as past tense. You need to change that...

Serj

Thanks for the comments Asif Dasl.

"Assist Server & Network team" Server and Network team are offshore. I was their hands and feet. I replaced server HD, modem card, RAID card, rebooted servers and gave them status on switches and servers.

Thanks again. I will make those changes.

Serj