Revised Resume Review

Hi guys,

I'm back again with my newest resume update. I took some of the changes and formats you guys suggested and I can tell it looks a lot better. I also tried to focus on accomplishments and money saving projects. Rezscore still gives me the same score though, but higher salary range! Cha-Ching!

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cyberguypr

You need to understand that a resume needs to be 100% perfect. Right now I'm still spotting bad capitalization, different fonts, and weird formatting issues.

NetworkNewb

Few capitalization mistakes (healthcare, non-profit, retail, antivirus, security, Mac, Track-It). Weird font in the Education section. Looking better though.

johnIT

cyberguypr wrote: »

You need to understand that a resume needs to be 100% perfect. Right now I'm still spotting bad capitalization, different fonts, and weird formatting issues.

Yeah, that's why I am posting it again, since I realized my old one was really bad formatting wise.

yoba222

I don't do any hiring, but I think it looks pretty good. Website looks good too. I don't like the word 'mac' in there. Mac, MacOS, OSX, something else.

The centered text in the body of the professional summary looks out of place to my eyes.

mgeoffriau

Dashes and spacing are inconsistent for the dates given for each job.

NetworkNewb

yoba222 wrote: »

The centered text in the body of the professional summary looks out of place to my eyes.

Yea, I believe it is because the title of that section isn't centered. Think in mine I just left the title of that part out of there.

johnIT

NetworkNewb wrote: »

Few capitalization mistakes (healthcare, non-profit, retail, antivirus, security, Mac, Track-It). Weird font in the Education section. Looking better though.

I'm going to work on the education sector. Thanks.

johnIT

NetworkNewb wrote: »

Yea, I believe it is because the title of that section isn't centered. Think in mine I just left the title of that part out of there.

And deleting that title gave me more room!!!!!

johnIT

mgeoffriau wrote: »

Dashes and spacing are inconsistent for the dates given for each job.

i noticed that as soon as i posted it

Mr.Robot255

January at bottom spelling mistake.

looks a lot better than the original