Welly_59 wrote: » You've gained ccnp and your still on helpdesk? Serious man gtfo and progress!
Codeman6669 wrote: » I have been fine tuning the resume, and that needs a little more adjustment then i think its best.
UncleB wrote: » Many times what you see as fine tuning won't help if the main construct of the CV is not easy for employers to read. I strongly recommend getting a sanitised copy posted here where we can offer targetted advice from people who process CVs regularly and know what will catch their eye.
techfiend wrote: » The format is good. A quick 5 minute initial reaction: 1. The summary needs to be more impactful, you want the job show the self confidence, this is top priority - Actually I would exclude this and expand it in the cover letter. I never read this as what you think you are is irrelevant - I will decide when reading the CV. Not being cruel but the CV has to tick boxes of skills and experience in 30 seconds or I'm binning it and reading your thoughts doesn't interest me. 2. Remove 11 years from the summary - agreed, this is irrelevant if you have the skills. 3. For career progression put company 2 above company 1, chronologically that's more accurate too - agreed, reverse order in time and progression. 4. Remove the technician positions to show you don't have a long IT career - keep the CV to just the last 5 years of experience. Anything unconnected to the job spec is irrelevant and I won't read it anyway. 5. Remove CCENT, superfluous but keep CCNP, CCNA, A+ - agreed, keep only the higher level certs. 6. Change "Currently Studying for Associates in Computer Science degree." to "Associates Degree, Computer Science, University, expected graduation month/year" - agreed, it needs to be time bound ortherwise you are just blowing smoke People looking at your resume see 11 years of IT applying for an admin or engineer position, see currently working network support, no degree and toss it. - agreed, keep the CV very focussed to show what the job ad is asking for with minimal other baggage.
volfkhat wrote: » Without having an Associates degree... i guess i agree with techfiend.
techfiend wrote: » N7Valiant, try psychology like I mention in #6. I've never been asked for proof of a degree. Cover letters may still be popular in other parts of the world but in USA they rarely have an option to upload one. The attention span has become so short that a quick, precise, confident summary is the attention grabber. This is mine "Service-focused systems engineer focused on cost, time, quality and scope. Highly skilled with vSphere, Windows and Linux servers. Accomplished in planning, implementing, and documenting IT solutions to support organizational needs."
volfkhat wrote: » Without having an Associates degree... i guess i agree with techfiend. You should probably keep the CCNP on the resume; although it still does Not help the "no ccnp exp" issue. You resume says "Network Guy"; so maybe the better question is "How do i get into security"? (although, you still need to identify which aspect of infosec you want to work in) You should also consider targeting some security certs, right? How big of a paycut can you take? maybe working a SOC would be helpful? Lastly, i would also consider relocating away from SoCal if the competition is a bit too High; although it looks like you move TO SoCal (from Florida) not to long ago? Lastly, if your current gig is "soul crushing"... then i guess the #1 goal is to GTHO. Period. Even if you lateral to another gig... they might have better career progression. (although i'd rather take a paycut & get some real exp somewhere)
techfiend wrote: » The format is good. A quick 5 minute initial reaction: 1. The summary needs to be more impactful, you want the job show the self confidence, this is top priority 2. Remove 11 years from the summary 3. For career progression put company 2 above company 1, chronologically that's more accurate too 4. Remove the technician positions to show you don't have a long IT career 5. Remove CCENT, superfluous but keep CCNP, CCNA, A+ 6. Change "Currently Studying for Associates in Computer Science degree." to "Associates Degree, Computer Science, University, expected graduation month/year" People looking at your resume see 11 years of IT applying for an admin or engineer position, see currently working network support, no degree and toss it. These changes show you started at help desk and took a step up to engineering. It may trick them into appearing you have a degree. The degree may be a talking point in the interview where you can express what you've learned and what you look forward to learning. Keep the CCNP as it shows you're serious about networking.
Codeman6669 wrote: » 3. So the very first job at the top of my list is my current job? or last job?