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Iristheangel wrote: » Here are my recommendations: 1) Delete the entire objective section 2) Don't claim to be a computer science major in your cover letter if you have one. You're a information technology major. Nothing wrong with that but you don't want to be claiming to have one degree when you really have another. 3) I feel as though the technical skills can and should be reduced/cleaned up. It's taking up WAY too much real estate your resume. 4) Use a smaller font. Something like 11 or 12, not 16 for your body. It looks WAY too enlarged. That's all I got for now. I'm at work and dealing with a deadline!
Akaricloud wrote: » There are a lot of things on this that would make me throw this out. 1. The huge font. I think it's the 1.5 font spacing that makes it look huge. 2. The poorly written objective. 3. Skills section that obviously doesn't fit your experience. Don't list things that you've touched unless you're an expert in them. 4. "Programming assignments/regular assignments that were assigned to be created by a team; were in fact completed by me." Huge flag. Can't work as a team? 5. No idea what your most recent job role was. When half of what you list is lifting boxes that tells me nothing. 6. Overall grammar definitely needs work.
NOC-Ninja wrote: » From the looks of it, you should at least find a desktop support or help desk job.
kalel wrote: » 5. its just a side job, i should expand on it...but it really has no relevance to my field, i would leave it off but then there is a huge gap in my experience section?
boredgamelad wrote: » What do you actually do? Maybe someone here can help you come up with some ways to make it sound relevant.
kalel wrote: » 2. i thought they were the same? thats what the university told me? thanks.
Whiteout wrote: » I don't mean to be rude or negative, but this could be the reason your having trouble finding a job. It seems very odd to me that somebody with a BS in IT and a MCITP doesn't know the difference between Computer Science and Information Technology. This kind of goes back to what Iris said: "5) Technical competency - Yes, this is different than certification"
lantech wrote: » There is a huge difference between a certification and experience. There are a lot of people with certifications that can barely operate a computer much less do the kind of work their certifications say they can. And employers have learned this. I knew an MCSE that didn't even know how to configure his own email account much less someone elses. Not saying this is you but it's what you're going to have to fight to get a job. And two weeks or even a month isn't all that long to be looking for a job. Have you thought about looking for contract positions?
eansdad wrote: » Experience is spotty, 5yrs as a best buy/staples tech to 6 months unemployed to a share point admin(?) to unemployed 7 months to a desktop tech. Need a lot more detail as to what you did. Also you don't need to explain what you did for your degree at UofP. I also don't see much from you're work exp the skills that you state you have.
kalel wrote: » 1. i didn't have 1.5? i had 1.15? i think its the font. i am using times new roman, have a suggestion about which font to use?
Akaricloud wrote: » Your font character spacing is set to expanded by .5pt. This makes it look much, much larger than it actually is and very hard to read. This is from your latest copy BTW, I'm sure the first was set the same though.
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