Entry Level Resume Critique

marcj04

Hey guys,I am a college senior and I have been trying to fine tune my resume in hopes of landing a job upon graduation. I took my resume to my Universities career services center and they helped me fine tune it in terms of formatting and appeal. I thought i'd ask you guys for help too. I know the content is not great but I have very limited experience and I really want to land an entry level Help Desk Job so I can help expand my resume. The help desk internship I have right now isn't really regular help desk support. It's a proprietary software that I am providing support for. I know the critique will be harsh but that's fine with me. I appreciate anything to help better my resume and help improve my chances of landing an entry level job upon graduation..Thanks guys!

marcj04

Also can I put that I was on the President's List (4.0 at my University)? Where can I put that?

cyberguypr

You know all the blacked out sections of personal info are visible via copy+paste, right?

marcj04

Thanks for the heads up. I fixed it and uploaded the new file

aftereffector

I'm just looking at it quickly, but I noticed a couple of different fonts (for example, between the bullets in the first job and second job in Work Experience, and between the text in Technical Skills and Academic Coursework). It looks like Cambria and Calibri. I'd pick one and stick with it for consistency.

Also, what is the UMBC Information Council of Majors, and would that be interesting to a hiring manager?

marcj04

Oh ok that was supposed to be Information Systems Council of Majors. Its a school club that meets up to discuss technology trends and job markets for IS majors. It was supposed to be all Cambria font. I fixed it. Thanks. Good eye on noticing that