Resume Critique - Need soon for an amazing opportunity - IT Compliance Position

robpomrobpom Member Posts: 22 ■□□□□□□□□□
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Can someone please give this a good look over?

Thanks!
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  • robpomrobpom Member Posts: 22 ■□□□□□□□□□
    Bump - need this ASAP.
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  • danny069danny069 Member Posts: 1,025 ■■■■□□□□□□
    From what I see, you can lose the summary, because I see all those things already listed in your current job. Try to make this one page, all the blank space on the 2nd page does not look good. You can shorten your college education, 1 line for each - Masters, then 1 line for Bachelors. Where is says "Selected to be a part of the Dell/Tenet Security Administration Technology team. Help address security issues that are impacting the entire Tenet Health System." I'd change that to "Part of the Dell/Telnet Security Administration Technology team which identifies and mitigates security issues that are..." You want to stay away from words like help and selected, we know you were selected, and we know you help, but what do you do to help know what I mean? Just my two cents.
    I am a Jack of all trades, Master of None
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