Resume Assistance

mizterkewlmizterkewl Member Posts: 122 ■■■■□□□□□□
I would like to really start actively looking for a new position in the new year. I want to get into Security maybe as an analyst. I get calls for a lot of entry level help desk positions and not sure what I can do to change that.

ResumeCritique.pdf

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  • EANxEANx Member Posts: 1,077 ■■■■■■■■□□
    Get rid of the planned certifications. Hiring managers want to see qualifications and accomplishments not plans. Some people like them, some hate them but I'm not a fan of the "sea of bullet points" approach, I prefer writing about accomplishments in paragraphs. The only two paragraphs you had, the two at the top, were a bunch of fluff.
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