Resume Review Please

DatabaseHeadDatabaseHead Member Posts: 2,753 ■■■■■■■■■■
As some of you know I have quit a bait and switch position recently.  Please take a look and make suggestions if you get free time.  Thanks


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    NetworkingStudentNetworkingStudent Member Posts: 1,407 ■■■■■■■■□□
    Overall I think it looks great!   

    On all the jobs please check the tenses:

    Senior Field Sales Analyst at ABC1 (12/18 – 2/19)
    Listed on the resume as:
    Creates interactive sales dashboards and reports using Business Objects and Tableau

    Provides reporting for all sales consignment medical surgical materials

    Should be 


    Cut back on some of the bullet points. Briefly write a small paragraph for what you did at that specific job, and uses the bullet points to call out your accomplishments.

    I think it would be ok to put the company you work for on the resume if you were a contractor.

    Contracting company/Company you worked for.
    When one door closes, another opens; but we often look so long and so regretfully upon the closed door that we do not see the one which has opened."

    --Alexander Graham Bell,
    American inventor
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    paul78paul78 Member Posts: 3,016 ■■■■■■■■■■
    It looks pretty good to me too. The only thing that I would suggest you change is in the summary. I know you are planning for another similar role which is why you are highlighting your 5 years of experience in that area. But I don't think you ought to lead off with it. As the reader, my first impression is that you started your professional career 5 years ago. You may be better off saying something like:

    "Business Intelligence and Business Analyst professional with over 10 years of technology experience. Most recently, spent 5 years working with relational and dimensional databases along ...."

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    DatabaseHeadDatabaseHead Member Posts: 2,753 ■■■■■■■■■■
    Paul thanks for the great insight, I'll write it differently up top.
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