Resume Review Please

As some of you know I have quit a bait and switch position recently. Please take a look and make suggestions if you get free time. Thanks

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NetworkingStudent

Overall I think it looks great!

On all the jobs please check the tenses:

Senior Field Sales Analyst at ABC1 (12/18 – 2/19)

Listed on the resume as:

Creates interactive sales dashboards and reports using Business Objects and Tableau

Provides reporting for all sales consignment medical surgical materials

Should be

Provided

Created

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Cut back on some of the bullet points. Briefly write a small paragraph for what you did at that specific job, and uses the bullet points to call out your accomplishments.

I think it would be ok to put the company you work for on the resume if you were a contractor.

Example

Contracting company/Company you worked for.

paul78

It looks pretty good to me too. The only thing that I would suggest you change is in the summary. I know you are planning for another similar role which is why you are highlighting your 5 years of experience in that area. But I don't think you ought to lead off with it. As the reader, my first impression is that you started your professional career 5 years ago. You may be better off saying something like:

"Business Intelligence and Business Analyst professional with over 10 years of technology experience. Most recently, spent 5 years working with relational and dimensional databases along ...."

DatabaseHead

Paul thanks for the great insight, I'll write it differently up top.