Resume review - thanks in advance

Is it still the same procedure to show a resume draft for review?
Redact and then post?

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There is no procedure that I know of for TE. Best pratice is to post your current resume with all your personal info removed, and the community will make suggestions on how to improve it.. Please remove all any phone numbers, names, email addresses, school, and company names. I hope this helps.

ElGato127

That was what I mostly saw people doing earlier.
Thanks your your help.

ElGato127 - Tech Support Engineer (Redacted).docx

Infosec_Sam

I think your resume has does a lot of things right, such as effectively summarizing each position you've held in a few bullets. It's easy to read, which is nice. As for corrections, I have a few:

Make sure all verbs in your bullets are past tense
Move IT certifications to right above education - maybe include "Extensive industry certifications" under 'Proficiencies'
Use bold text a little more sparingly in your Teacher bullets and Education section

Other than that, you'll just want to make sure you have at least one bullet in your Experience section to correspond to each bullet in your Proficiencies section, in case a hiring manager is interested in what you've done with, say, SalesForce or MDM. Those are really my only suggestions, nothing too bad! Nice resume!

ElGato127

Those are solid suggestions. Working them in. Thanks

LionelTeo

Write a summary after each job before the bullet points highlighting your achievements.

Your title should include your work place

Technical Support Engineer, Tech Exams

Other headers could use a smaller font size.

As an example.

Technical Support Engineer
My primary works includes supporting xxx and yyy. During my time with the firm, I had also contributed greatly to the development of zzz. My greatest challenge is to work out the ttt process which is very manual. I had initiated a project ....