Help with resume. Applying for an internal promotion within the company I currently work.
I have a 2 page resume and have been in IT for 16 years, but I have never applied for an internal job before, always external so a bit weird for me to be interviewed by people I know quite well.
My main question is along the lines of how to write a profile.
My original profile was this:
"A dedicated, results-driven IT professional with 16 years
of experience in planning, coordinating, implementing, and evaluating the
effectiveness of systems, infrastructure, and staffing required to accomplish
department projects and objectives. Specializes in network and system
administration, file retention, server management, Exchange admin, Office 365
Admin, SCCM, and Active Directory. Now pursuing to advance my experience,
skills, and expertise with an established organization
who promotes teamwork and mutual growth."
I know the last part needs to be changed (or maybe all of it) because I am not pursuing that anymore, I'm pursuing a network admin position within the company I work, but I'm not exactly sure how to word it.
I feel like removing all of what I have done in the past is not a good idea because I have been a part of some large projects at my last 2 jobs and since that is what this focuses on I would like to leave them in there.