Help with Summary Statement

meadIT

I'm having a rough time coming up with a good Summary statement for my resume. I am finishing up my Associate's degree in Networking, but I don't currently work in the IT field.

So far I've come up with:

CompTIA Certified Network+ Professional, soon-to-be graduate of [School's name] with an Associate's of Applied Science degree in Information Technology with a specialization in Networking.

Any suggestions? If it helps, you can see my resume @ http://www.bkmeadows.com/webresume.doc

bighornsheep

I wouldnt put your highschool information on your resume. That's like 15 years ago.

Are you applying to a SPECIFIC position or general cold calling/sending of jobs? Try something like:

"Seeking position as ___, applying skills of computers, networks in preforming responsibilities of ___, ___, and ___.

meadIT

Right now it's just for a blanket resume.

I've heard rumors that this position will be hiring soon, but they don't accept resumes, you have to fill out an electronic application for it. Of course, I'll tailor my resume to that job's responsibilities if I get called in for an interview, just in case they ask for a hard copy of it:

General Definition of Work:

Diagnoses and repairs computer hardware and software problems. Installs and configures computer hardware and software. Assists Support Analysts and other department members with projects.

Essential Functions:

* Repairs and maintains computer hardware;
* Installs and configures hardware and software;
* Assists senior level staff with projects when necessary;
* Keeps necessary records for equipment repair, parts costs, and other necessary records to properly maintain repair functions;
* Helps maintain master inventory of computer equipment;
* Helps maintain master inventory of computer software;
* Assists in the budget preparation for computer hardware, related parts, and supplies necessary for the prompt maintenance;
* Maintains adequate parts inventory for computer hardware;
* Determines the necessary repairs which must be sent to outside vendors and assists in the negotiations with these vendors;
* Assists staff in the selection of appropriate computer hardware with respect to the purchase of new equipment;
* Provides staff development as necessary on the use and simple maintenance of computer hardware;
* Provides status reports to supervisor and to management;
* Meets departmental and organizational deadlines;
* Performs various other activities as required.

Knowledge, Skills and Abilities:

Strong logical abilities; ability to work and perform under pressure; ability to work well with people.

Education and Experience:

Any combination of education and experience equivalent to graduation from high school supplemented by college study and training related to computer hardware maintenance; a thorough knowledge of the operation and repair of computer hardware; general knowledge of inventory and distribution procedures; previous experience in the repair, maintenance and installation of computer hardware is preferred; previous experience in the installation of computer software is preferred; possession of a valid motor vehicle operator's license

Physical Conditions and Nature of Work Contacts:

Typical tasks include: constant use of monitors, keyboards, and mice; working with other equipment such as computers, laser printers, etc.; handling small fragile electronic components; moving and installing heavy equipment such as computers, monitors, printers, etc. which can weigh as much as 100 pounds, and constant use of the telephone. Also required: frequent work activity after normal duty hours, and occasional weekend and holiday duties.

Evaluation:

Will be evaluated on the ability and effectiveness to carry out the responsibilities as outlined.

wizarddeath

Hmmm, just meet with someone today. They actually recommended I take the Summary/objective statement off of my resume.

How do yo guys feel about that?

Smallguy

wizarddeath wrote:

Hmmm, just meet with someone today. They actually recommended I take the Summary/objective statement off of my resume.

How do yo guys feel about that?

I've removed my objective because it is kindda pointless if you think about it. almsot everyone's is someling like

"to gain employment in the "field name" and work my way up. it says nothing about you.

instead I used something like

Proven It professional with 4 year of experience. I recently graduate with honour from XYZ with a diploma in Network and internet security. At my last job I consistently performed in the top 2% of over 1000 employees.

I tihkn that was pretty much the exact wording. It obviously will not work well for someone with out experience but if you have experience use number to back up your argument.


you need to WOW the person reading your resume and get there attention facts and figures can do that for you... maybeu had a 4.0 GPA... put that there....you need to give thme a reason to take a better look at ur resume instead of the other 100 on thier desk.

Smallguy

bighornsheep wrote:

I wouldnt put your highschool information on your resume. That's like 15 years ago.
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I diagree although it is kindda old info it should be there it differntiates someone who has a high schol diploma from someone with a GED or mature student status. As crazy as it sounds I've seen a lot of places make you show nthe your highschool diploma even with a degree under your belt.