Resume help bad! I suck!

5502george

Ok here are two versions of what I have so far. One page and two page versions. Please give me any advice at all, all of the online resume grading software I can find grades my resume low

....Any advice will help!

...Also which should I go with the 1 or 2 page resume. Thanks!

cyberguypr

IS the PDF working for you guys? Seems corrupted or something.

pramin

I got errors opening up both PDF's.

spiderjericho

Me too.